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The Captive Maiden - Melanie Dickerson

So the Gary Sue, I mean the hero, is walking through the marketplace when this happens:


As he wandered, a girl of perhaps seventeen or eighteen years caught his eye. Truthfully, it was her hair that fixed his attention - long and blonde, and somehow it reminded him of his sister Margaretha's hair, even though his sister's was reddish brown. (NOOK p. 13-14)


Yeah, I think he fell off his horse in those knight fighting tournaments one too many times. Because blonde hair =/= reddish brown hair.