when you are reading and the MC has so many quirks and judgments (harsh, assertive judgments) that it is not really the MC's character traits but the author's likes/dislikes/opinions/preferences that are coming through? I mean loudly and assertively coming through. I don't know if I can get through another 132 pages of this MC's constant harping on her preferences/dislikes - at this point I am wondering if I will get a mystery at all between the BS characterizations (see previous post about same book) and now the constant quirks of the author MC.
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